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Of The Eclipse

Story 4/40 in The Forty Weeks Challenge

By D. D. LeePublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Of The Eclipse
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Evangelist held out hopes of a coming, yet to be seen

Christian teachings from Acts to Revelations, that spoke the blackening of the sun

Lo, the beliefs from which the ancients drew their understanding

Imbued with beliefs of love and relationships, unhappy gods, devourings, plots of revenge, or sickness and death

Profound meanings drawn from the natural acts of celestial bodies

Shout the shadowing of the sun

Eternal in the sky, the eye of heaven will always and forever shine

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This story is an entry into the eclipse challenge.

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Comments (8)

  • L.C. Schäfer3 months ago

    This definitely has a chance in the challenge 😁

  • Shirley Belk3 months ago

    Captured the church's prophecies. Very good writing here!

  • Sandra Tena Cole3 months ago

    Such strong writing! Loved it 🖤 x

  • Lamar Wiggins3 months ago

    I can't imagine seeing an Eclipse for the first time and not knowing what it was. Great entry, Darnell!

  • Ainy Abraham3 months ago

    Eternal in the sky, the eye of heaven will always and forever shine. A beautiful line and it is the divine force. Wishing you all the best.

  • Mariann Carroll3 months ago

    Outstanding!!!!

  • Joe Patterson3 months ago

    Well done.

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