Evangelist held out hopes of a coming, yet to be seen
Christian teachings from Acts to Revelations, that spoke the blackening of the sun
Lo, the beliefs from which the ancients drew their understanding
Imbued with beliefs of love and relationships, unhappy gods, devourings, plots of revenge, or sickness and death
Profound meanings drawn from the natural acts of celestial bodies
Shout the shadowing of the sun
Eternal in the sky, the eye of heaven will always and forever shine
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She flings her arms around my neck and squeezes me like she’s never going to let me go. My head spins as her lips brush against my cheek. She must be able to feel my heart thumping in my chest. I shuffle backwards and ram my hands into my coat pockets, watching her reach down and heave the rucksack across her shoulders.
By Caroline Craven3 days ago in Fiction
Comments (8)
This definitely has a chance in the challenge 😁
Captured the church's prophecies. Very good writing here!
Such strong writing! Loved it 🖤 x
I can't imagine seeing an Eclipse for the first time and not knowing what it was. Great entry, Darnell!
Eternal in the sky, the eye of heaven will always and forever shine. A beautiful line and it is the divine force. Wishing you all the best.
Beautiful poem!
Outstanding!!!!
Well done.