Ode to the Atlantic
Come sit awhile, and let your worries fade away

Cobalt crests
Break enthusiastically
Above peaceful pools
Of navy-streaked turquoise.
Inquisitive trills
Of ruby robins
Too young to register
The malice lurking beneath
The enchanting charade
Ring brightly
Through the easy grace
Of the utopian June atmosphere.
Onyx eyes of otters dart energetically
As the elongated loafs
Of mahogany fur
Tumble playfully upon the
Golden grains.
Deep down,
In another life,
With a stronger consciousness
Not lulled by the soothing rhythm
Of the ocean’s unrelenting wane and wax,
I know better to believe the façade.
Idyllic landscapes
Simple red herrings
Distracting from the true state of things,
As brilliant sunsets before the dark.
Rainbow rivers of waste
Overflow from ostentatious landfills
Stuffed to the brim
With yesterday’s most coveted treasures.
Toxic, glittering, iridescent drops
Trickle down,
Eroding history
And memories of what once was,
Reducing once proud mountains
To anorexic hills
Quietly echoing the majesty
Of what used to be.
Angry oozes of crimson and amber
Flowing from deep jet caverns
Eviscerate all who dare to enter their path
As the gentle breeze
Helps to carry ash far and wide,
Turning all souls for miles
To inky outlines,
The screams frozen upon their visages
As permanent mementos etched
Into the dusty bones of the earth.
Boorish vats of obsidian ooze
Seep slowly to mix
With the swirling cerulean peaks,
Staining the tides
With their inescapable sludge
As a prism of inhabitants
Comes to rest at the surface.
But here,
In this moment,
On these perfectly smooth rocks
Comfortingly bleached
By years of
Unrelenting flaxen rays,
All troubles fade to black.
About the Creator
Kat Thorne
Just muddling through life, trying to be the good sort of chaotic energy.
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Comments (8)
Beautiful nature poem. I’ve only seen the Atlantic from an airplane, but I loved experiencing it through your words.
Wow! This was a stunning poem. The imageries were brilliant. Very beautifully written. I loved it so much!
Love this! As a Maritime Canadian, I love the ocean. Well done!
Wow. This is incredible. Very well done.
Beautiful. Love the satire. I'm from the Caribbean. I know the oceans. Subscribed and hearted.
I felt so relaxed reading, I think this one is a contender.
Those last few lines!! I loved the imagery of the whole poem, but that ending really got me. So beautiful, great work :)
Love nature poem and your is lovely!!!👏💖😊💕 Subscribed 😊