My land was ravished by a quake-
That left spaces I did not know how to refill-
And before I could craft a recovery plan-
Lava started emerging from the crevices-
It was so sudden and forceful -
I went into shock-
I stopped blinking-
Every particle turned to ash-
My land was unrecognizable-
And uninhabitable-
But there was no possibility of me deserting my land-
It had been attached to me since the womb-
So, -
I laid motionless-
Too blistered to scream-
As my land tried to combat the traumas it had been laden with-
Mud crept in-
Carefully and precisely-
Cooling and compressing-
My abused land-
Until I could stand again-
And without a speck of hesitation-
I walked-
My land being gawked at-
Because brown never matched brown so perfectly-
My land told them-
There is nude for all shades-
All tones
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