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No distractions

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
No distractions
Photo by July Stip. on Unsplash

Dipping my fingers into your pomegranate pink,

I appreciate your finite crevices, and like a good boy,

Sip up all your cool lemonade

Tracing my tongue into caverns

Racing beats that I feel in my mouth

All I can think is why no one could ever appreciate your

Curves as well as you deserved before,

Tasting you like a heavenly smoothie, I don’t let any drops go to waste

Isn’t this how floating on a cloud must feel?

Over and over again I’ll kiss your sleepy forehead

No distractions, because I’m focused only on your intense pleasure

love poems

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

I write short stories and poetry. I hope you find yourself in between the spaces of my words.

My Patheos column profile on art history.

My debut novel I am Bexley has been published by Resurgence Novels and you can read it on their app here.

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  • Paul Stewart4 months ago

    Okay, erm, yes...well. I need a glass of water, cold shower or something to cool off after reading this!

  • Naomi Gold4 months ago

    I loved EVERY line of this, but especially: “No distractions, because I’m focused only on your intense pleasure.” That’s true intimacy, being fully present with someone. I love the way you took the word distraction and turned it on its head.

  • This made me think of Janelle Monáe's Pynk (for obvious reasons) love it, Sis.

  • Tiffany Gordon 4 months ago


  • Dana Crandell4 months ago

    Where's the fire extinguisher?

  • No that's intimately hot, my friend.

  • Dana Stewart4 months ago

    Sensual and written beautifully. This is a great piece!

  • Precious💖😊

  • Real Poetic4 months ago

    Sexy and sweet. 😍

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