Dipping my fingers into your pomegranate pink,
I appreciate your finite crevices, and like a good boy,
Sip up all your cool lemonade
Tracing my tongue into caverns
Racing beats that I feel in my mouth
All I can think is why no one could ever appreciate your
Curves as well as you deserved before,
Tasting you like a heavenly smoothie, I don’t let any drops go to waste
Isn’t this how floating on a cloud must feel?
Over and over again I’ll kiss your sleepy forehead
No distractions, because I’m focused only on your intense pleasure
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Okay, erm, yes...well. I need a glass of water, cold shower or something to cool off after reading this!
I loved EVERY line of this, but especially: “No distractions, because I’m focused only on your intense pleasure.” That’s true intimacy, being fully present with someone. I love the way you took the word distraction and turned it on its head.
This made me think of Janelle Monáe's Pynk (for obvious reasons) love it, Sis.
Phenomenal!👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
Where's the fire extinguisher?
No that's intimately hot, my friend.
Sensual and written beautifully. This is a great piece!
Precious💖😊
Sexy and sweet. 😍