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no crowns

a poem

By Alivia VarvelPublished 9 months ago 1 min read
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a flower will fall from the sky,

and everyone will say, "it's beautiful."

i'll say, "no. but it once was, and no one knew."

they'll beg me to rule the world

and say, "please."

i'll say, "no."

they'll turn to each other

and say, "follow her anyway. she knows things we don't."

i'll say, "i don't know anything. and i know everything."

they won't hear me,

and they'll follow me

as i make my way as i always have.

they'll stumble over each other to look back

and say, "look at that. i wonder what it was like before."

and when all that is left of me

is the words i once spoke,

when there is nowhere and nothing else new,

they'll finally know.

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About the Creator

Alivia Varvel

time is the most precious commodity

https://www.aliviavarvel.com/

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  • Test7 months ago

    This poem is a work of art. It is perfectly crafted and deeply meaningful. It is a poem that I will never forget."

  • Mackenzie Davis9 months ago

    LOVE this! The perils of following someone blindly, the personality rather than the logic in their words...Truth revealed when that's all that's left. I adore your flower metaphor at the beginning; this felt like a loop, almost, from start to finish. Fantastic, as always!

  • Outstanding ❤️✨

  • L.C. Schäfer9 months ago

    That's people for you. Brilliant imagery in this one 😁

  • Whoaaaa, this was mindblowing! Fantastic poem!

  • Ashley Lima9 months ago

    This is so wonderfully written and surreal. Really well done

  • ThatWriterWoman9 months ago

    Beautiful. This felt like folly in the following of someone.

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