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i know the ending

a poem

By Alivia VarvelPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
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i know the ending
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i slipped through a door about seven.

i knew not to look back.

in awe, i was lost,

but there was no passage when i thought to return.

i stayed in hopes of a secret.

i observed from inside.

through a pane of glass, they could see me,

but i could not reach beyond the barrier.

i saw the most vibrant colors.

i heard songs that could not pierce through the veil.

when i told them, they scoffed,

but they didn't know the window was there.

i begged for the way back.

i silently screamed while they smiled and waved.

after a lifetime, i stopped my uphill clawing,

but i saw a light when i finally sat still.

i no longer wish for the path to reveal itself.

i stopped pleading for them to hear.

but do they know about the door to the in-between?

do they know you can see the end of the world there?

sad poetry
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About the Creator

Alivia Varvel

time is the most precious commodity

https://www.aliviavarvel.com/

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  • Test7 months ago

    Your poem is a beautifully written and thought-provoking piece of work. It explores complex themes such as isolation, longing, and acceptance in a unique and compelling way. Thank you for sharing it with us.

  • Mackenzie Davis9 months ago

    This gets to a deep emotional truth, I think. Separation like this -- it is the end of the world. It is clawing toward the light for a lifetime. It is hopeful hopelessness for others to understand. Wow. Amazing work. 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

  • I have to echo the others… surreal ! Painful, yet beautiful, yet detached, yet also deeply felt , 👌🙏❤️✨

  • Jazzy 9 months ago

    So surreal 😭

  • Ashley Lima10 months ago

    This is wonderful. Ethereal and surreal.

  • Kenny Penn10 months ago

    This is a powerful poem, thank you for sharing

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