Enshrouded in darkness the sun did hide,
Covering the promised land where the saviour died,
Looming shadows of the nails where he bled,
In the tears of his Mother the light had fled,
Pierced side and pierced sky - a moment in time
Story of love that would be a sign
Eternal message of hope for all in pain
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Leo Dis Vinci
UK-based creative, filmmaker, artist and writer. 80s' Geek, Star Wars fan and cinephile.
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This was certainly emotional. Loved your Acrostic!