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Naani

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By Mother CombsPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
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Gossip remains

Upon one's shell-shaped ears

Far longer than the truth

Lies upon one's bow-shaped lips

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It is easier to believe

That everyone dislikes

You rather than believe

That they love you

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Love is like a flower

With the proper

Treatment it blooms

Without it, it withers and dies

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Friendship is like love

Treated right,

it will last forever

Ignored, it will wither away

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http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/naani.html

Naani is one of Indian's most popular Telugu poems. Naani means an expression of one and all. It consists of 4 lines, the total lines consists of 20 to 25 syllables. The poem is not bounded to a particular subject. Generally it depends upon human relations and current statements. This poetry was introduced by one of the renowned Telugu poets Dr. N.Gopi, presently working as vice-chancellor to Telugu University, Andhra Pradesh.

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Comments (11)

  • Shirley Belk6 months ago

    "It is easier to believe That everyone dislikes You rather than believe That they love you" Made me stop in my tracks and stay there for awhile! Bravo

  • Denise E Lindquist6 months ago

    Thank you for the form!!❤️ Love it and your poem!😊💕

  • TheSpinstress6 months ago

    Beautiful poem, and great to learn about the form too!

  • Hannah Moore6 months ago

    I've never heard of this form, interesting.

  • k eleanor6 months ago

    Lovely poem. Great work!

  • Oh wow, I thought Naani was a girl's name! Your poem was brilliantly executed!

  • Grz Colm6 months ago

    These are truly excellent! All the words seem to belong right where they are to get the message across. Great work, and another new form to explore! 😊👏

  • Beautifully written and so true... "Love is like a flower With the proper Treatment it blooms Without it, it withers and dies" The things I'm learning on Vocal!! Thanks.

  • Kodah6 months ago

    Beautiful piece! ❤️

  • Babs Iverson6 months ago

    Lovely poems and loving the format!!!

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