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Words Swirling In A Free Form Poem Like Smoke From A Campfire

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished about a year ago β€’ Updated about a year ago β€’ 1 min read
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Another poem that came to me on a walk inspired the stories and tales my Muse and I love to fall into. I hope I can make it visually like smoke from a campfire but the Vocal editor may not let me do it. I tried to do something similar with my After The Show poem that I wrote with Melissa and you can read it at the end of this poem.

I included "Brothers Gather Round" by The Cosmic Rough Riders because it feels right for this poem. The album review is linked as the final piece of this story.

The editor destroyed the form, but it still looks fine, but I have screenshotted what I wanted to happen.

πŸ”₯β€οΈπŸ’¨ πŸ”₯β€οΈπŸ’¨ πŸ”₯β€οΈπŸ’¨ πŸ”₯β€οΈπŸ’¨

Autumn Leaves

Fall From Trees

The Words We Read

Set Us Free

πŸ”₯β€οΈπŸ’¨

Rivendell

A Place Where

In Love We Fell

With His Words

πŸ”₯β€οΈπŸ’¨

My Aphrodite

From Olympus

Beautiful Sight

Ocean Goddess

πŸ”₯β€οΈπŸ’¨

On To Asgard

Wotan Freyja

Thor Hammers Hard

Northern Stories

πŸ”₯β€οΈπŸ’¨

Together

We Read Tales

Forever

Setting Sail

πŸ”₯β€οΈπŸ’¨

Your Hand In Mine

Feeling Close

As We Turn The Page

And Fall Into

The Next Chapter

In Our Book Of Love

πŸ”₯β€οΈπŸ’¨ πŸ”₯β€οΈπŸ’¨ πŸ”₯β€οΈπŸ’¨ πŸ”₯β€οΈπŸ’¨

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Mike Singleton - Mikeydred

Weaver of Tales, Poems, Music & Love

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  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Romantic. Love it. πŸ₯°

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Oh, that looked and sounded so cool in the picture form!! I really wish Vocal allowed for better editing!!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    very nice.

  • Colleen Millsteed about a year ago

    Fantastic Mike. I love it.

  • This was so wonderful and I loved the form!

  • Veronica Coldironabout a year ago

    Wow! This not only swirls and smokes, it reaches right in and grabs you! Beautifully written!

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