My Tongue Sings of You
An across the room poem
My tongue sings of you, my love.
Though years since we first met at the college party,
I remember as if it was yesterday.
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We were both flying high,
Competing for a non-existent life-of-the-party award.
I was dancing with anyone willing
And you were kissing anyone who held still.
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It took us until the end of the party to connect.
I felt fireworks I had never experienced.
So much time passed.
We were inseparable...
Until I learned
You were no more.
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Now, my tongue sings of you, my love.
The life of you
And the loss of you.
Until we meet again,
I sing.
About the Creator
Julie Lacksonen
Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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