my kitchen, a window
a poem
Over a simple dessert of
clementines and conversation,
she rubs her belly and offers some advice:
"Wouldn't you love
to make a living doing this?"
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I've just served her collard greens,
slow cooked in a cast iron pot,
soothed with butter until the leaves
fold like gentle yoga.
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She says it's the closest thing to Georgia
she's tasted west of Texas and north
of the Mason-Dixon line.
I can tell by the way her eyes
slip towards the window
that her memories of home
don't warm her like mine do,
but there's something to be said
for proper collard greens.
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I've never cooked in a restaurant.
Never felt my feet grip rubber mats
or said Order up! in anything but fun.
I've never worked a line or station,
but I've seen the dance they talk about.
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My kitchen fits one comfortably,
but two people who know what they're doing
can make dinner prep look like
a game of Mousetrap, or a Rube-Goldberg machine –
every bowl and body part set just in time to receive
the egg yolks, the soaked beans, the cream sauce near to
breaking.
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It's no secret that I sing to my garlic.
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The nicest man I ever cooked for
swore he could taste melodies in my soup.
I can conjure my grandmother
with an onion, a frying pan, and a fire.
I'm not sure they teach you this in cooking school.
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So, no. I won't ever make a living out of these acts
of soup and birthday cake.
Instead, I'll cook like homesick medicine,
turn my built-for-one kitchen into a window
that frames your belly's desire,
where the scent of garlic and collard greens
can set you dreaming
of home.
About the Creator
Dane BH
By day, I'm a cog in the nonprofit machine, and poet. By night, I'm a creature of the internet. My soul is a grumpy cat who'd rather be sleeping.
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Comments (5)
"I've just served her collard greens,/slow cooked in a cast iron pot,/soothed with butter until the leaves/fold like gentle yoga." I am enthralled.
"It's no secret I sing to my garlic" - my new favorite line of this competition - please keep writing!
This was so wonderful. Loved how you've incorporates all the senses into the poem. Fantastic job. I loved it!
Wistfully sublime. Adore this poem. ❤
Garlic: brings out the best :)