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Mother Nature

Eclipse this Winter and Give Us Spring.

By Jen Parkhill “JP”Published 27 days ago 1 min read
Top Story - April 2024
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Mother Nature
Photo by Rosanna Gaddoni on Unsplash

Every time I set my glass down, it leaves a ring.

Cool water in that familiar shape of infinity.

Little planet of molecules, combed right out of the air, as if cloud carried.

I fall to my knees in reverence, complex miracles of mundanity, this sparkling symphony, our beloved galaxy.

Phenomenon of thunder clouds banging with soul-splitting sound, rain falling from the open hand of gravity.

So tender are the leaves that raise their flags on the branches of trees, offering shade from sun's blazing heat.

Eclipsed by winter woe and longing, we lick our wounds and lay in wait for mother's womb to deliver spring.

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About the Creator

Jen Parkhill “JP”

Jen Parkhill “JP”, a first generation Cuban-American artist and proud member of the LGBTQIA+ community. Cat dad, writer, filmmaker, actor, friend, and graduate of the Tisch School of the Arts, NYU.

Hurling through time.

@jenparkhill

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  • Salako Emmanuel13 days ago

    This is good

  • Beautiful piece of mother earth!

  • Beautiful, Jen. Congratulations on the Top Story designation.

  • Wow this is amazing! Congratulations!

  • Novel Allen26 days ago

    Love the last verse. Lovely birth of all the earth. Congrats.

  • ROCK 26 days ago

    I so loved this; I must say the ECLIPSE challenge has it's work cut out for the judges ( whoever they are). This would be right up there with my top five thuse far. Pure and wondrous creation!

  • JBaz26 days ago

    Right from the first line you set a picture before us. Congratulations

  • lovely! congratulations.

  • congratulations on your top story.👍

  • Robert Rawson 26 days ago

    Brilliant really enjoyed your work ✍️👏💯

  • Janee Austen26 days ago

    Congratulations on your top story

  • Spring the most awsited 🙏💕🥰 Congrats for top story 🥳

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  • Anna 26 days ago

    Amazing poem! Congrats on Top Story!

  • Janee Austen26 days ago

    congratulations on your top story

  • Andrea Corwin 26 days ago

    Nice Eclipse poem and congrats on TS.

  • Ameer Bibi26 days ago

    Congratulations 🎉 🎉 for top story Your perseverance is both admirable and motivating. Keep forging ahead!

  • Heather Zieffle 26 days ago

    Congratulations on TS! Lovely poem.

  • An incredibly crafted poem. In consistent awe of your work. Congrats on a well deserved Top Story

  • Margaret Brennan26 days ago

    congratulations on TS. This reminds me of an emergence of life - in any form. Well done.

  • D.K. Shepard26 days ago

    Wow! The opening imagery was so strong and the lines continued to flourish from there! Great acrostic!

  • Cathy holmes26 days ago

    This is lovely. Great take on the challenge. Congrats on the TS.

  • Kendall Defoe 26 days ago

    This captures a sweet moment and something deeper and richer beneath it all... Top Story indeed... ;)

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