this is getting tiring
this is getting lame
this is getting boring
it's just more of the same
so i washed my hair
but i have no brush
i don’t want to hurry
but i need to rush
nothing is different
it's all just the same
and this subtle reality
it's part of the game
i brushed my teeth
washed my face
everything seems to be
i’m it's place
but something is missing
something is wrong
it might feel right
but the short is the long
the circle is square
the round is flat
i want my pudding
my dogs a cat
the middle is the edge
and the end is the start
rumble in tummy
i'm scarred to fart
the truth is all lies
but the confusion is pure
and this is my lot
mine to endure
when i think of all the misery
i could carry in my load
i thank the powers of fuck
that i'm not a choad
i may be a knob end
and a bit of a twit
i'm a nugget of gold
that’s been dipped in shit
this is getting rigid
now aint that a shame
getting used to it being rigged
it's all part of the game
About the Creator
Brenton F
It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa
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Comments (1)
Spectacular. Feels like I'm rolling downhill into a pile of used needles and toilet paper, to the beat of a damnably catchy tune. Much of your work speaks harshly to the closeted cynic inside every unbearable optimist (like me), and warmly to the snarky, confident — if terrible — dancer inside every meek and gutless wimp (like me). If none of this is what you want to hear, that's okay. Please keep going.