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Misty Madness

Tangling cards

By Rowan Finley Published 14 days ago 1 min read
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Fingers snapped,

a million chandeliers,

flew to the floor,

a black marble, stoic sea.

Then, splashing,

beautiful shards,

like a hand of cards,

sometimes you win,

and sometimes…

you play again,

and again,

and again...

until maybe you’re broke,

or bitter, or both.

Is it not enjoyable to pretend?

Tending to power isn’t easy,

which leads to the need to rest.

A test of sleep, that never fell fast.

Eyelids, half mast,

on the ship,

of misty madness.

Sailing through trippy dreams,

and thunderstorms,

and faulty social norms.

surreal poetry
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About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. Aspiring licensed mental health counselor. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Archery Owl12 days ago

    It makes me think of chaos and beauty meshed together

  • John Cox14 days ago

    You packed a lot into a few words, Rowan. Beautifully done!

  • Manisha Dhalani14 days ago

    Those last few lines - wow!

  • Colleen Walters14 days ago

    Very sad beautiful trippy imagery

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