Missing Submarine
A prayer poem
The bottom of the ocean
Is dark, spooky…
I wonder what
Undiscovered creatures
Swim deep
Under there.
I wish the water pressure
Wasn’t so high.
If I had the potential to save
The lives of those stuck
In the submarine,
I would if I could…
The scene of the titanic
Isn’t worth never being
Seen ever again…
Money cannot buy life.
The ocean is more powerful
Than green.
My heart broke when I saw
Their faces pop up on
My screen.
I pray they are found.
Down in the unknown.
Until the timer runs out,
I won’t be able to put down
My phone.
This poem is a prayer for the ones trapped in the Ocean Gate submersible. 😪💔
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Comments (4)
Thank you for the prayerful poem, R.P. Regrettably, there were no survivors. My heart breaks when I imagine what they faced. 😪💔
Beautiful, I love this. Blessings 🥰
Your words beautifully convey the emotions that keep us glued to our screens, hoping for a positive outcome. Keep writing and touching hearts with your prayers and reflections!!!🙏📝🤗
The ocean is definitely more powerful than green. Thank you for writing this poem as a prayer for all of them!