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Weight of the past
Stories we tell ourselves
Usurp the need to decide
Ahead that is unwritten
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Brought forth from the dark
Serving the light
These emotions and words untamed
Understanding should guide our weary hearts
Let us have answers
Let these ring true
Everything good about me
Was once something the world had offered
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Drawn forth
Towards that flame that won't die
Inertia finds a way
Are we truly free?
This is the only life I have known
A dream within a dream it seems
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I'm not alone
I am here
Requiescat in pace
Authors note: I have been busy with work, so if I haven't had time to dedicate to Vocal for reading; but I plan to remedy that.
Comments (13)
It’s alright. We all need a break sometimes. I sure did, but I’m back and more ready than ever to read as much as I can. Great poem!
The burning rose really sets the tone. Drawn back from grief and inertia, to find the words that ring true. Really hypnotic.
Gorgeous poem, Jazzy! There are some truly mesmerizing lines in here. I also really loved the word "Requiescat"...brilliant work :)
Great poem and brilliant writing as always! Don't worry about reading everything. I took a break from reading on vocal recently and it really helped me absorb more writing when I came back! <3
Requiescat, I learned a new word today! This was such a beautiful poem!
Everything good about me Was once something the world had offered 🕊️❤️✨ which is why to be proud never feels right…. and appreciation does. This has been on my mind again lately. Beautiful poetry Jazzy
Another great poem Jazzy!!
Wow-These lines 'Stories we tell ourselves Usurp the need to decide Ahead that is unwritten' Stunning 🤍🤍🤍
Beautiful poem! You talk about my poems being good, yours are quite something. Don't worry I've been busy too. We can't seem to keep up haha
Great poem! Loved it loved it.
I love it!
🥹🥹🥲 thank you
Beautiful