Mine: To Have and to Hold
"If it's destroying you, then it isn't love, my dear." ~ Unknown
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I saw you standing,
a proud tower of Eden.
I had to have you.
With splinters of ice,
that I laid in clement times,
I got into you.
and eroding your softness.
I made you brittle.
Now, you fall apart
into my ocean abyss.
Piece by piece, you're mine.
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Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Sending hugs for this amazing poem, as always wonderful words Caroline
Oh wow, you did an amazing job making me feel! Those last few lines held so much emotion. Excellent.
This is gorgeous. Very well done.