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Metamorphosis

Series: Fragments of my mind

By CyrusPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - January 2024
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"Magical butterfly" from Desktop Nexus

15 February, 2022, past midnight.

Metamorphosis

Conceal.

Don’t show.

Don’t let them in,

To your world of pain.

***

Conceal.

Hold still.

Never reveal,

The turmoil within.

***

Conceal.

Like your life depends on it.

The wolves will eat you

If you let your feelings defeat you.

***

Conceal.

Put on that smile.

Enjoy that pain.

As it kills you within.

***

Dead you are born

Conceal?

No more!

What’s there to hide

If you don’t feel the pain

***

No need for masks,

Your face becomes one

Nothing to feel,

Nothing to hide

Nothing to

Conceal.

***

~ End ~

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Cyrus

Welcome to the fragments of my mind. Thoughts. Ideas. All once a chaotic yet artistic mess, before I expanded them into entire, complete poems.

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  • sleepy drafts3 months ago

    Oh, I love this. I adored, "The wolves will eat you If you let your feelings defeat you." I love your use of the symbolism of butterflies and metamorphosis to emphasize your points in this poem. Beautifully and artistically done. 💗

  • Toby Heward3 months ago

    Love this story

  • Nice job! Following you on Medium!

  • Dana Crandell3 months ago

    Smooth and sad. Well done, and congrtulations!

  • Misbah Sheikh3 months ago

    Beautifully written ❤️

  • Aaliyah Madison3 months ago

    Congratulations to TS

  • Kodah3 months ago

    ❣️ The rhythm was outstanding ❣️

  • Grogu3 months ago

    well done!

  • Andrew Zuk3 months ago

    Congratulations 🎉🎉🎉💗

  • Miranda Ashburn3 months ago

    Excellent.

  • Oneg In The Arctic3 months ago

    Sad, but sometimes true. We wear many masks, at some point they become our skin. Sometimes it sucks. Sometimes we lose sight of who we actually are anymore.

  • Cathy holmes3 months ago

    Very nicely done.

  • When there is nothing to hide, our lives but open books within which nothing is written.

  • Tressa Rose3 months ago

    Wow this was beautiful

  • Lovely empathic poetry

  • Manisha Dhalani3 months ago

    I sense that a lot of people can resonate with this - I sure did!

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