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This is for the Vocal Time Capsule Challenge

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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This is for the Vocal Time Capsule Challenge, it is my second and final one even though I said I would only do one.

This is actually a haiku

Music, appropriately, is "Memories" by Robert Wyatt

⌛️ ⏱ ⏲ ⏰ ⏳

Summer Memories

In Your Mind To See You Through

The Cold Winter Months

⌛️ ⏱ ⏲ ⏰ ⏳

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Mike Singleton - Mikeydred

Weaver of Tales, Poems, Music & Love

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  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    nothing like a memory to brighten the cold seasons

  • PK Colleranabout a year ago

    Nice work! Yes, how warm memories carry us through cold and dark times.

  • This was so deep! Fantastic job!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Oh, this is amazing! Really, really loved how you did this, Mike :)

  • Misty Raeabout a year ago

    Very nice. The cold winter months are almost over....I can almost feel spring coming. :)

  • Jason Ray Morton about a year ago

    You nailed it! Great work!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Nicely done.

  • Oneg In The Arcticabout a year ago

    Well done! Though knowing me, I’d swap the first and last line hahahaha WINTER MONTHS to get me through the summer 🤪

  • Gerald Holmesabout a year ago

    Well done Mike.

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Very true, Summer memories like the beach does keep you warm in winter months, great imagery. This Challenge is hard to resist for sure ❤️🥰

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