Melody's at Midnight
A Heartbreak Song
Hey, I thought I'd share this draft of a song chorus I wrote! Hope you enjoy!
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She was my everything
She was my saving grace
She was my lonely night
She was my happy place
I took her out to nowhere lying underneath the stars
Played her like a fiddle but it only broke her heart
No-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh
You'll never know
Woah-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh
Please let me go
No-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh
She'll never know
Woah-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh
Please let me go
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A few comments said I should continue writing this song, here's a verse I wrote to go with it!
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She ain't even my ex, but we were smokin' together
You could smell the hot sex, and the dope on my sweater
Sending me a text, with the hope of whatever
But I couldn't go on, livin' broken together.
Still I hold her forever, Never letting her go
Her memory lives on, in the back of my soul
Hitting from the bong, and packing a bowl
Knowing it was wrong, now I'm back in control.
Still,
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Let me know what you think!
If you enjoyed this, Check out another song I wrote!
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