In my heart and soul
An ocean swells and thrashes—
Swallowing me whole
About the Creator
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On Winning and Losing
Recently, the pleasant surprise of placement on the Vocal Bonus Leaderboard sent me down a rabbit hole. Now, rabbit holes are a pretty common place for me to spend time, but I don't always feel the call to write about them. To be honest, the thought of sharing some of them mortifies me.
By Dana Crandell4 days ago in Writers
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Such a powerful way to capture the feeling of melancholy. Really well done!
This was incredibly relatable! I loved it!
I feel this.
Hey, just letting you know I shared this poem in my story Poppy's Preferences: https://vocal.media/journal/poppy-s-preferences-pt-5
Great Haiku!
You definitely have a poets heart. Great Haiku.