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Insurmountable waves of blue

By AphoticPublished about a year ago 1 min read

In my heart and soul

An ocean swells and thrashes—

Swallowing me whole

nature poetrysad poetry

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  • Ahna Lewis8 months ago

    Such a powerful way to capture the feeling of melancholy. Really well done!

  • This was incredibly relatable! I loved it!

  • I feel this.

  • Poppy 8 months ago

    Hey, just letting you know I shared this poem in my story Poppy's Preferences: https://vocal.media/journal/poppy-s-preferences-pt-5

  • Poppy 8 months ago

    Great Haiku!

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    You definitely have a poets heart. Great Haiku.

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