Excuse me Mister
But who do you think you are?
You pretend you’re something special
Call yourself a Rock Star.
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You waltzed into my world
And changed it,
You made it more
Then away you flit.
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You invaded my mind
Invaded my heart,
Took away my pride
Then again we part.
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You bring me to my knees
And even made me cry,
What more do you want
Why do you deny?
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I cried for hope
Cried for you,
Cried for the past
You only withdrew.
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You’d not let me believe
Give me no future,
Lived for today
Could’ve let me know sooner.
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Mister you can sing
About those glory days,
Love won or lost
Memorable holidays.
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See how much I care
But Dongara waits for no man,
Of course.........
I’ll meet you there.
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Colleen Millsteed
My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.
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This was beautiful!