I wonder if it would make you blush
To hear that when I make brownies
I think of making love
To you.
Melting the butter to golden brown,
I listen for the crackles and pops to cease—
Like hearing the change in the way that you breathe;
The warm, nutty scent of it
Like breathing in the oils that rise
To the surface of your skin.
Chopping the chocolate finely as it melts,
Languid beneath my finger tips—
Like you?
Like me.
Like pieces of myself deliciously surrendered beyond my control.
Surreptitious tastes of batter
Are salty;
Not too much, but just enough,
Dropping from the spoon
Like the kisses I spill with abandon
Across your neck, chest, arms, hips.
Spreading gently but firmly into the pan,
Lower, higher, just there, oh, just right;
Careful that every last inch wanting more
Is satisfied.
The rise as it finds its place in the oven is subtle, but captivating;
Tantalizingly tumescent,
So close, but wait,
Wait…
When at last it’s finished,
Still quivering at the center,
Tender as your enfolding forearms,
I know that the pleasure of making
Is only a taste of the pleasure of having
What I have
With you.
About the Creator
Tiffany Mercer
Just your basic, garden-variety fiction dweeb. :-)
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Heartfelt and relatable
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Comments (3)
Now I want brownies and sex 😁
Brownies from a bedroom installed convection oven. Nicely done. Very vivid.
This is vivid and beautiful. Well done! I really want to go make brownies now. :)