Mabel
This poem came about while I was writing a very long teenage love story. Mabel became very important to the young lovers discovering each other and understanding the absurdity of the adults around them. Makes you wonder why we want to grow up.
Mabel you are truly, a beauty in blue
But look what time and neglect has done to you
Four cylinders and four wheels just waiting to go
Two doors, now two more, you waiting to glow
You waited there quietly covered in grime
Until she found you in such a state, she thought it a crime
So with love and a hose and a sponge and a tub
We set about uncovering your beauty, though we did have to rub
Oh, dear Mabel, who could have known?
as you waited quietly for some love of your own
you would become part of a bigger story
I am quite happy to share in the glory
She and me now, on our new journey
We needed a place to make sense of this yearning
You gave us some freedom, a way to escape
from our boring existence, the peers and the gapes
You became our escape pod, like floating in space
We seemed in a hurry, though you set the pace
Slow and steady was the best you could do
That was OK, ‘cause our days were so few
You carried us where we wanted to go
The where didn’t matter, if you needed to know
You gave us the time to talk, share, discover
And try and make sense of our love for each other
Mabel I’m sorry, we’ve left you alone
We’ve both had to journey so far from our home
And left you to sit and wait, and I wonder
Will you think of us while we travel yonder
I make you a promise, I make you a vow
That on our return, I will show you somehow
How much we have missed you and how loved you are
You are part of our family, you lovely little car
I would like to acknowledge the great Pam Ayres, who used to visit Australia often an appear on daytime variety shows. She is my inspiration. I wish I could be as funny.
About the Creator
Phil Flannery
Damn it, I'm 61 now, which means I'm into my fourth year on Vocal, I have an interesting collection of stories. I love the Challenges and enter, when I can, but this has become a lovely hobby.
Comments (6)
Hi Phil ~ I'm so glad that I've discovered your VM work. Your thought out 'presentations,' along with the lovely drop downs, caught my eye.*I've subscribed to you to see what's next. I'm just a self-described (3) minute "Goof-Writer" ~ not a challenge guy. Interacting among 'Creators' is the most meaningful to me. I can so relate to this and your "1st Sight" with (3) of my shorts; different styles ~ But same recipes! Ooh ~ I have an e-type named "Millie" Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Authors Community -
A great story in this!
Love this!!!
I can relate to this great piece. My first car had that effect on me, even though it was gone way too fast.
Oh this was absolutely wonderful 🤗. Through memories we see the friendships we made, even if those friends come in the form of a beat up, but trust car 🤗. ❤'d and subscribed.
Great light and comedic tone and I love the personification (I think that is the right term) of the car! 😁A terrific job.