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lust for coconuts

for Caroline Jane’s VSS Haiku Honey competition ✨

By Kayleigh Fraser ✨Published 3 months ago 1 min read
lust for coconuts
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This sounded like a fun challenge to try. I’ve put the link at the bottom and I hope you will also give it a go!

I spent way, way longer on this than intended and came up with way too many variations….now all I can think about is milky, juicy coconuts…. 😅


sacred milky juice

sumptuous delicacy

slurped by lustful men



Just for fun…. Here are some of the others that I didn’t choose.

Let me know if you have a favourite?

Would you have selected the same one I did?


Sacred milk and flesh

Beneath protective hard shells.

How to tease them out?


Juicy coconuts

Tantalising man’s desire

Will he be sated?


flesh, milk, oil, juices,

hidden treasures beneath shell -

- ignite man’s desire


milky, sticky juice

sumptuous delicacy

from sweet coconuts


Fleshy coconuts

Tantalising man’s desire

Will he be sated?


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About the Creator

Kayleigh Fraser ✨

philosopher, alchemist, writer & poet with a spirit of fire & passion for all things health, wealth & love related 💫

“When life gives you lemons,

It’s because you are asking for them.

If you want oranges, focus on oranges”


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  • Teresa Renton2 months ago

    I love the elevated status you bestowed on coconuts. Sumptuous indeed. Congratulations 🥳

  • Sandra Matos2 months ago

    They were all tantalizing! I really want a coconut!!!! I've never thought of a coconut quite this way. Now, I will only think of them this way. They may even replace mangos as my aphrodisiac!

  • Love this set of haiku , great work

  • ThatWriterWoman3 months ago

    Honestly I like them all Kayleigh - but the one you picked is especially good!

  • Kristen Balyeat3 months ago

    Mmmmm!!! So good! Great take on the challenge, Kayleigh!

  • Teresa Renton3 months ago

    Love them all!

  • Dana Stewart3 months ago

    All of these are gold, but I do favor your lead one. Great job Kayleigh. Plus the title is bank.

  • All I can say is that I gotta get my mind out of the gutter, lol! These Haikus were fantastic!

  • Grz Colm3 months ago

    I love that you thought so hard about this. Such a pro!! 😊 The first is perfect!! 🤩

  • Hannah Moore3 months ago

    I like number three from the back up list, maybe the best, or maybe the one you chose. Its close.

  • Celia in Underland3 months ago

    Loved them all! I was toying between your choice and the last because I really liked the use of the question. But I think you're right-Final decision is the best one 🤍

  • Alex H Mittelman 3 months ago

    My desire is to tell you how awesome this is! Great work!

  • Well done... deliberate double entendre, I presume, in your final selection?? 💙 Anneliese

  • Cathy holmes3 months ago

    Hot, sensual, sexy. Love it!

  • Mother Combs3 months ago

    I agree with Lamar. They were all great. But the one you choose has the best effect.

  • Lamar Wiggins3 months ago

    I liked them all. But the one you chose has the best effect in my opinion. Great entry!

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  • Caroline Jane3 months ago

    HOT!!!!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 I love them all but I have to say... this one doing it for me. 🤣🤣🥰 flesh, milk, oil, juices, hidden treasures beneath shell - - ignite man’s desire Thanks for participating. You are a superstar!! 💫💫💫💫❤

  • Paul Stewart3 months ago

    All that juice. all that juice. This was great, Kayleigh! Great entry for the challenge and I like the one you chose, though, the other options are all fab too!

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