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lust for coconuts

for Caroline Jane’s VSS Haiku Honey competition ✨

By Kayleigh Fraser ✨Published 3 years ago 1 min read
lust for coconuts
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This sounded like a fun challenge to try. I’ve put the link at the bottom and I hope you will also give it a go!

I spent way, way longer on this than intended and came up with way too many variations….now all I can think about is milky, juicy coconuts…. 😅

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sacred milky juice

sumptuous delicacy

slurped by lustful men

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Just for fun…. Here are some of the others that I didn’t choose.

Let me know if you have a favourite?

Would you have selected the same one I did?

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Sacred milk and flesh

Beneath protective hard shells.

How to tease them out?

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Juicy coconuts

Tantalising man’s desire

Will he be sated?

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flesh, milk, oil, juices,

hidden treasures beneath shell -

- ignite man’s desire

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milky, sticky juice

sumptuous delicacy

from sweet coconuts

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Fleshy coconuts

Tantalising man’s desire

Will he be sated?

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About the Creator

Kayleigh Fraser ✨

philosopher, alchemist, writer & poet with a spirit of fire & passion for all things health & love related 💫

“Darkness to me is like water to the sea”

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    Written by Kayleigh Fraser ✨