lust for coconuts
for Caroline Jane’s VSS Haiku Honey competition ✨
This sounded like a fun challenge to try. I’ve put the link at the bottom and I hope you will also give it a go!
I spent way, way longer on this than intended and came up with way too many variations….now all I can think about is milky, juicy coconuts…. 😅
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sacred milky juice
sumptuous delicacy
slurped by lustful men
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Just for fun…. Here are some of the others that I didn’t choose.
Let me know if you have a favourite?
Would you have selected the same one I did?
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Sacred milk and flesh
Beneath protective hard shells.
How to tease them out?
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Juicy coconuts
Tantalising man’s desire
Will he be sated?
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flesh, milk, oil, juices,
hidden treasures beneath shell -
- ignite man’s desire
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milky, sticky juice
sumptuous delicacy
from sweet coconuts
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Fleshy coconuts
Tantalising man’s desire
Will he be sated?
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About the Creator
Kayleigh Fraser ✨
philosopher, alchemist, writer & poet with a spirit of fire & passion for all things health & love related 💫
“Darkness to me is like water to the sea”
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