Love, Son, Love
A poem for a son.
I see you as you gasp,
A Dr's swat,
Made you gasp,
Yell, and live.
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Hair dark and deep
Skin nude and pink,
No love as pure,
As my love for you.
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You came out of me,
Part of me,
Thru you, I'm a mum
A mum of a son.
About the Creator
Ruth Stewart
I'm a grandmother of four amazing grandchildren and a mum of three fabulous children. I write poetry mainly, also prose and the odd story. I live in Scotland, UK. For a secret link to watch me read my favourite poems click right here!
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Comments (3)
Oh, this is just gorgeous. I can feel the love your words. Excellent piece.
This is stunning. Among your finest so far, babe. Love it. Really well done on this. The rhythm and word choices were impeccable!
Such a beautiful poem to match a beautiful relationship! I loved it!