Photo by Krišjānis Kazaks on Unsplash
web of blue veins wind
under moon-white skin, a map
points you to my heart.
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Chloë J.
Probably not as funny as I think I am
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (6)
Simply gorgeous
So much to unravel with this one. The idea of veins leading back to one's heart, but instead to a lover's heart. And a map...just gorgeous, all that this can mean. Congratulations!
Such evocative imagery. A perfect photograph metaphor that says so much about a relationship. Really beautiful. ❤
This was one of my favorite winners. Well done
Congratulations. Great haiku
Oh, I like this. Very nicely done. Congratulations