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Love Map

A haiku

By Chloë J.Published 2 years ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Blue Haiku Challenge
13
Love Map
Photo by Krišjānis Kazaks on Unsplash

web of blue veins wind

under moon-white skin, a map

points you to my heart.

love poems
13

About the Creator

Chloë J.

Probably not as funny as I think I am

Insta @chloe_j_writes

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Poppy 11 months ago

    Simply gorgeous

  • Mackenzie Davis12 months ago

    So much to unravel with this one. The idea of veins leading back to one's heart, but instead to a lover's heart. And a map...just gorgeous, all that this can mean. Congratulations!

  • Alison McBainabout a year ago

    Such evocative imagery. A perfect photograph metaphor that says so much about a relationship. Really beautiful. ❤

  • Matthew Perrinoabout a year ago

    This was one of my favorite winners. Well done

  • Raymond G. Taylorabout a year ago

    Congratulations. Great haiku

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh, I like this. Very nicely done. Congratulations

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