Love At Its Best
Hype It Up
You put the gas on my fire 🔥
lit me up, let me burn.
Put your hot coal out for hire,
left me with no way to turn.
I love you - I said it, what else do you need?
A fool for your love, if you need me to be.
To the ends of the line, tow the road, I’m all in,
for once in my life I don’t want it to end.
Toss the fuel, make it hot,
I ain’t goin - not now.
Give me all that you got,
I’m game for more than a vow.
What this is, time will tell,
but till then, here I’ll be.
What ever comes next,
say you will stay here with me.
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Comments (5)
Beautiful. A wonderful declaration of hope & openness to another again.
I'm game for more than a vow. That was my favourite line!
Fantastic, Kelli!! I should've known this challenge would be no challenge for you!!
Sweet poem Kelli 🥰
Wonderful with Great Rhythm...😊💖