Love at first sight
a pantun
From across the room, love at first sight
Unexpected, you conquer my heart
Warm thoughts will guide me through the cold night
Yet, too afraid to admit - apart.
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Unexpected, you conquer my heart
And my stomach fills with butterflies
Yet, too afraid to admit - apart
Seeing you and all of my soul cries.
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And my stomach fills with butterflies
You enlighten my innocent gaze
Seeing you and all of my soul cries
Burning for your touch, like a hot blaze
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You enlighten my innocent gaze
Warm thoughts will guide me through the cold night
Burning for your touch, like a hot blaze
From across the room, love at first sight!
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Christian Bass
An author, who writes tales of human encounters with nature and wildlife. I dive into the depths of the human psyche, offering an insights into our connection with the world around us, inviting us on a journeys.
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Comments (1)
Hi Krishan - Although we come from different sides of the globe it's amazing how far the vm platform reaches out from when you wrote this over (2) years ago. This caught my eye since I wrote a '1st Sight' piece also (2) years ago "Spaghetti Straps" - we have very different styles - but, frankly, it would be very boring if we were all alike. Going back to view all of your new offerings. Jay, Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Village Community