Lorelei
A Short Love Story Inspired by Richard Osman's House of Games
I didn’t know that Marilyn Monroe’s name in “Gentlemen Prefer Blondes” was Lorelei Lee, I found it out on Richard Osman’s “House of Games” and that kicked me off to write a love poem based on the concept of the Lorelei.
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I fell for your Siren Song
My Beautiful Lorelei
Then I Fell In Love Headlong
I caught your beautiful eye
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Above the sea, so aloof
Your voice so sweet, Alluring
Be My Queen, You Have My Heart
I Will Never Be Turning
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My Lorelei, Sea Maiden
Mermaid girl, With voice of gold
Love your gentle persuasion
One day each other we’ll hold
My Lorelei, I Am Yours
And So This Love Will Endure
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