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Sonnet #10

By Babs IversonPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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Author's photograph taken in 2005 at Portrait Restaurant in the National Portrait Gallery

Whilst Autumn had a warm September.

Vacationing in United Kingdom,

a London adventure to remember.

Perfect planning was behind the wisdom.

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Travel to Hampton Court and London Eye,

Then, posh tea at the Portrait Restaurant.

Along the river and looking at the sky,

walking to Tate Museum was a jaunt.

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Accommodations could have been grander.

Walking distance to Paddington Station.

Breakfast in our room we didn't meander.

Eight days, each one was a celebration.

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Photographs of the trip to remind us.

Going to London was worth all the fuss.

Writer's notes: Thank you for reading! Traveling to London in 2005 was a delightful adventure, the wine tasting before touring Shakespeare's Globe theatre will always be remembered. A brilliant canal boat ride before we visited the London Zoo. We were out and about all eight days from 10 A.M. to 11 P.M. every day. While we do have a number of pictures from the vacation, the photograph above is a favorite. Cheers!

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About the Creator

Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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  • E.K. Danielsabout a year ago

    Love this. London and paddington esp will always hold a special place in my heart, and this was a wonderful reminder. And kudos for following the traditional Shakespearean sonnet! —pentameter and all! 🤓

  • Irene Mielke2 years ago

    I love sonnets. I actually wrote a few a while back!

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