Seeing Beauty from the Mountaintop
On top looking down
Little me never a frown
Back down looking up
a Haiku for the High-ku challenge!
About the Creator
Rick Henry Christopher
Writing is a distraction for me. It takes me to places unknown that fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and a soothing of the breaks and bruises of the day.
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Very beautiful. The more I read of your work, the more meaning I see in it. Your writing is very inspirational. Fantastic!
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Well written and very descriptive. I could almost see myself walking back down the mountain and looking up from the bottom.
Excellent entry for the challenge Rick, sometimes limitations can be a great challenge to our creativity
This was powerful and I loved the different perspectives in your poem!
Very nicely done.
A haiku journey … well done … 🥰
We truly are so small compared to the mountains.❤️ Great work with this!
Wonderfully written!!! Life's ups and downs. Love it💕
Powerful & small - contrast - love it! :)
Very well done. I love the contrast between the two viewpoints.
I loved the perspective change! It was a very powerful device to use, and the picture went so well with it. Loved it, Rick!!
In a society that has become so centered in "self", the moments of our own insignificance can be so humbling... and freeing.
Very good perspective. We are very small in the scheme of things