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Little Me

by Rick Henry 27 days ago in nature poetry / inspirational · updated 27 days ago
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Seeing Beauty from the Mountaintop

On top looking down

Little me never a frown

Back down looking up

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a Haiku for the High-ku challenge!

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Rick Henry

Writing is a distraction for me. It takes me to places unknown that fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and a soothing of the breaks and bruises of the day.

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  • Dr. Constance Quigley9 days ago

    Very beautiful. The more I read of your work, the more meaning I see in it. Your writing is very inspirational. Fantastic!

  • Thavien Yliaster20 days ago

    Time to get back up. Time to master something else. Look for new mountains.

  • Carol Townend25 days ago

    Well written and very descriptive. I could almost see myself walking back down the mountain and looking up from the bottom.

  • Excellent entry for the challenge Rick, sometimes limitations can be a great challenge to our creativity

  • This was powerful and I loved the different perspectives in your poem!

  • Cathy holmes26 days ago

    Very nicely done.

  • Scott Wade26 days ago

    A haiku journey … well done … 🥰

  • Gina C.26 days ago

    We truly are so small compared to the mountains.❤️ Great work with this!

  • Babs Iverson26 days ago

    Wonderfully written!!! Life's ups and downs. Love it💕

  • Keila Aartila26 days ago

    Powerful & small - contrast - love it! :)

  • Dawn Salois26 days ago

    Very well done. I love the contrast between the two viewpoints.

  • Heather Hubler26 days ago

    I loved the perspective change! It was a very powerful device to use, and the picture went so well with it. Loved it, Rick!!

  • Sissi Smith26 days ago

    In a society that has become so centered in "self", the moments of our own insignificance can be so humbling... and freeing.

  • Very good perspective. We are very small in the scheme of things

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