Greetings Poets Community,
As some of you already know, I now present my poetry aloud. The next two poems I have uploaded are “Promise Street” and “Write through it all” for those that love slam!
Positive feedback and constructive criticism is a hundred percent acceptable in the comment section. Go easy on me though, please. I am just beginning! 😆
I hope you all enjoy this set. My poetry is written directly from the heart. I just feel an emotion and start to write whatever comes to mind. If you like my style of writing, hit the subscribe button on Vocal and YouTube for more poetry. ❤️❤️
Promise Street
Write through it all
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Comments (5)
Wow, so cool! Well done, R.P.!
Awesomeeee! I've liked and commented on both!
As always, these were great pieces. Your word choices, along with your vocal choices about when to pause and what words to emphasize add a new layer of gravity to your poetry. I've attempted to do spoken word poetry in the past as well but I always scrap the idea because of my insecurities about my voice. But I love hearing good poets who can recite/perform their poetry just as well. Beautiful work!
Great job on these 2 Pieces😉❤️❗
I loved them both, but write through it all will leave a lasting impression. It's very relatable. Great job narrating. You know how and when to inflect the words to give that intended effect. Bravo!!!