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Let the Poor and Downtrodden Sing!
Villanelle Challenge Entry.
Hear hear, let the poor and downtrodden sing
The song of their captivity to poverty
Full of woe for what tomorrow will bring
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Cuts and callouses on fingers that sting
A life that offers anything but equality
Hear hear, let the poor and downtrodden sing
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Toiling all day, while in luxury sits the king
Sleepless nights, the result of inequality
Full of woe for what tomorrow will bring
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To any mere glimmer of hope they do cling
A day without destitution, would be a novelty
Hear hear, let the poor and downtrodden sing
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With nothing, they worry about everything
They look forward with animosity
Full of woe for what tomorrow will bring
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Perhaps it's time to wear that g-string
And make ends meet from man's precocity
Hear hear, let the poor and downtrodden sing
Full of woe for what tomorrow will bring
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Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: Okay...so I kinda love Villanelles a little now. Hate rules still, but every so often, it's good. I like the chant, singsong feel. Which is why I took that approach with this one.
The theme is self-explanatory I feel. The image is a gross exaggeration, but get's the point across, I feel.
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Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
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Comments (8)
What if we were to make it a crime to live in luxury while others suffer in poverty? I know, I know, they have the power. But we have the numbers. (If only it wasn't so easy to distract us & persuade us that our problems are because of others only marginally different than us.)
Are you the 'King of Villanelles' yet? So good... With nothing, they worry about everything They look forward with animosity Full of woe for what tomorrow will bring.
So u Love villanelles now! Hahah. Nice one! I liked this line particularly “A day without destitution, would be a novelty”. 👏 The chant singing vibes work very well too!
You're starting to like Villanelles now? Who are you and what have you done with Sir Paul Shakespeare? Lol. Your Villanelle was so well done!
There was an interlude...yup, I'm feeling les miserables here.
The words are like a melody, expressing the pain of inequality and the uncertainty of tomorrow. Your poetic prowess shines brightly in this heartfelt composition. 💯
What a wonderful way to write this for the challenge!
This is really poignant and bravo for taking on this Challenge is such a spectacular way.