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Latchkey Kids

The Sin of Pride

By Gerard DiLeoPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
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Latchkey Kids
Photo by Anita Jankovic on Unsplash

“I willingly believe that the damned are, in one sense, successful, rebels to the end; that the doors of hell are locked on the inside.” — CS Lewis

Bad times keep us growing

Good times keep us going

Until we outgrow

And, do, we outknow

The One, Who, calls the shots

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Good times can go bad

Bad times, only, had

Till the fine line between

Can no longer be seen

Cannot wash, out, damned spot

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Redemption's a joke

Damnation a cloak

To hide us from Him

Divine antonym

Out of sight, there, no doubt

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Grand tour’s over

Full disclosure

Tallies our score

Down to the core

Kettle calls, black, the pot

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Welcome back is a phrase

Denied by our ways

Of rebellion to the last

Joining those who are cast

With those who, Him, hear not

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We're the cocksure winners

And the shockproof sinners

Who owe, no One, apologies

To forgive self-serving qualities

Key-in-pocket, stay, our lot

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About the Creator

Gerard DiLeo

Retired, not tired. In Life Phase II: Living and writing from a decommissioned church in Hull, MA. (Phase I was New Orleans and everything that entails. Hippocampus, behave!

https://www.amazon.com/Gerard-DiLeo/e/B00JE6LL2W/

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran6 months ago

    Good times can go bad. Very true. What can go wrong would definitely go wrong. Loved your poem!

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