Ladder to the Sky
Haiku challenge
By Sarah LoydPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
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Painting by my sister
Ladder to the sky
The entrance to Heaven's gate
That's the mountaintop
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About the Creator
Sarah Loyd
I love movies, music, TV, and all things entertaining. I also love to write poetry. Follow me on Twitter @musicl0v3 and on Mix https://mix.com/sarahloyd You can also find me on Pinterest @sloydmarie
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Comments (12)
"The entrance to Heaven's gate" my favourite line. Perfect description of mountains!
Lovely. Stairway to heaven is playing in my head now. 🥰
Great job!
It is a great ladder Indeed. Very memorable
well written!
Brilliant and beautiful!!!
I love the assertiveness of the final line, it makes a big impact
Beautiful piece
Such strong imagery in the first two lines which gave the third such an impact. Simply beautiful. Excellent work :)
Beautiful!
Your Heavenly Words - A Perfect Solution To - This Vocal Challenge Great Haiku
I like this spiritual take on the challenge. Good job!