Knitted and Neat
Sweater skin
You were the mist in the dewy morn
Drizzle in the city I was born
Steamy tea, brews and broth
Maple syrup, nutmeg and acorn
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You were the crisp in the orange leaves
waltzing on the streets
the pumpkin spice and the frail twigs
apple bite, candle spark and cinnamon twist
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Cuddle under blanket soft
café in the corner vintage shop
purring cats and old blues
cosy cabin in the woods
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Roast chestnuts and hot chocolate mug
Christmas lights and fireplace rug
Snowflake glittered pine
crackling cold and mulled wine
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Now in guilt I churn and turn...
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This skin of yours
I slowly learn how to caress
How to feel and nest
New vessel, sweet old scent
Honey glazed and oak built
Borrowed yet destined
It clothes my naked soul
Sweater for now that you're gone
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This skin of yours I had
Before our dreams went bad
To cherish and to hold
Frankincense, myrrh and gold
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Pilgrim on your neck
On my knees to pray and beg
Sacred shrine
Bestowed and mine
Ether and dream
The comfort I wished to die in
Now you're gone
Before we are old
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Still this skin of mine persists
This skin you sent I shall not resist
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⚜ For my late husband.
⚜ Pictures are selected and combined in a collage to capture the aesthetic imagery and symbolism of the poem.
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About the Creator
Jessie Wylder
Writing has been my safe place, my antidote to grief, my love language, my psychonaut trips.
I'll give you what we all need; a hand, a shoulder, an empty page to sign your existence.
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Comments (9)
Excellent poem!!!
Very Bittersweet, I loved it
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Excellent poem!
Beautiful Jessie!! Great work!!
It warms my heart and makes me tearful at the same time <3
It felt like a hug!
Very cosy and beautiful!
Very beautiful