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Kiss Me, You Colossal Screw-up

It’s Complicated, Like an Abecedarian Poem

By Cathy holmesPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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An abundance of extravagance and pizzazz

Booming rhythms, my heart beats play

Cool you are, like a slow concert sax

Dashing into my view

Enchanting, on your ATV

F. U.

Get out of here, you presumptuous twat

Hurry away with your stupid toys

Immature smooth operator

Jarringly low, my judgement IQ

Kiss me, you colossal screw-up

Let me see your antihero

Make my decorum abandon

Never would I fall before, on a whim

Oafish behaviour gone afoul

Primal urges, thunderstruck

Quench dried lips with vodka and O.J.

Rebel Yell bourbon for you. Surprised? No, not I

Savouring every drop of you, every ripple, every arch

Titillating vibrations, emotions aching

Uttering no words on my mind’s behalf

Vacant thoughts bewildered, a daze

Want controls me, no logic desired

Xylophone plays on nerves electric

Yellow warning shines a bulb

Zealous passion surrounds your aura

love poems
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About the Creator

Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    You are so good at this form!! It flowed naturally which is so hard to do with those constraints. Loved it!

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  • Omg, this Abecedarian poem is wayyyyy better than mine 😍

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