Kiss Me, You Colossal Screw-up
It’s Complicated, Like an Abecedarian Poem
An abundance of extravagance and pizzazz
Booming rhythms, my heart beats play
Cool you are, like a slow concert sax
Dashing into my view
Enchanting, on your ATV
F. U.
Get out of here, you presumptuous twat
Hurry away with your stupid toys
Immature smooth operator
Jarringly low, my judgement IQ
Kiss me, you colossal screw-up
Let me see your antihero
Make my decorum abandon
Never would I fall before, on a whim
Oafish behaviour gone afoul
Primal urges, thunderstruck
Quench dried lips with vodka and O.J.
Rebel Yell bourbon for you. Surprised? No, not I
Savouring every drop of you, every ripple, every arch
Titillating vibrations, emotions aching
Uttering no words on my mind’s behalf
Vacant thoughts bewildered, a daze
Want controls me, no logic desired
Xylophone plays on nerves electric
Yellow warning shines a bulb
Zealous passion surrounds your aura
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Comments (2)
You are so good at this form!! It flowed naturally which is so hard to do with those constraints. Loved it!
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Omg, this Abecedarian poem is wayyyyy better than mine 😍