just like that
poem.
just like that, last night
you were gone and our whole world
felt dimmer, darker
*
we will move forward
and it will get easier
but, for now, we grieve
*
for all you gave us
your unforgettable smile
and genuineness
*
you were warm and kind
loved music, family, food
and you fought so hard
*
I'll never forget
that spirit and drive you had
to not just give in
*
we will always, and
when we say, always, we mean
we'll always - love you
*
Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: For my Uncle Claudio that passed away last night, 23rd May, 2024.
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Comments (26)
So very sorry Paul… your dear Uncle Claudio was obviously a great blessing to you all. Be gentle on yourself as you grieve.💜
Condolences, Paul, to you and the family
I am so, so sorry for your loss Paul. This is a deeply beautiful tribute to your Uncle Claudio.
I am so sorry, Paul. Beautiful tribute poem!
Beautiful elegy, Paul. I’m sorry for your loss!
Goodness, now I understand. I am so sorry, Paul. I just lost someone too, and there are more on the way. I can’t imagine your grief, even still. Beautiful tribute. 💜
Just to let you know this is a Raise Your Voice nomination by me
💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔I’m so sorry, Paul, I know how it feels, friend! Blessing are flowing to you…. My over the rainbow ones visit me sometimes.
A truly touching tribute! Very sorry for your loss, Paul.
A beautiful tribute. I am so sorry for your loss, Paul. I hope that you are surrounded by warmth and love, and that his memory never fades ❤️❤️
You've created a beautiful tribute here. This is a touching poem and oddly timed to my life too. I lost my father-in-law last night. How weird, right? Well, I'm so sorry for your loss. Take time for yourself! ♥️
Poignant and powerful. I’m sorry for your loss ♥️
This is lovely. I'm sorry for your loss. 🤗
Sincere condolences from our house to yours, Paul. Both of your tributes to him are a wonderful homage.
This was incredibly touching. I'm so sorry for your loss. Sending hugs and love to your family.
Sad to hear and read this. Sounds a great guy that fought a helluva a battle. 😔
Sending love to you and your family, Paul 🤍🙏
A lovely tribute--condolences for your loss, good sir.
Sorry to hear about your uncle and I think this is a beautiful farewell poem:(
Sorry to hear that , but a good way to remember someone who meant something to you and others
Best way to express grief and its acknowledgement - write about it, get it out. Hugs to you and your folks.
Oh nooooo 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 I'm so sorry for your loss Paul. I know how devastating it is. Sending you lots of love and hugs 🥺❤️
Nice Paul nice!
Lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it.
Sorry for your lost of a family pet. Pets sure inspire us . The poem says how your pet touch your life