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Just Another Girl

Who are you really?

By KodahPublished 3 months ago โ€ข Updated 3 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
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In the shadow of her friend,

Who she had to befriend,

Who was she really?

Just Another Girl.

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Forgotten in the shadow,

Her heart,

Heavy with the weight of being unseen,

Just like it was a forgotten dream~

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In the shadow of her friend,

Who she had to befriend,

Who was she really?

Just Another Girl.

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Fading into the background,

A ghostly figure,

Her friend takes center stage,

Growing bigger~

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The door to her room,

She walks with gloom,

Now having her own existence,

In this world of darkness~

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In the shadow of her friend,

Who she had to befriend,

Who was she really?

Just Another Girl.

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Authors Notes:

Thank you so much for reading my poem! โค๏ธ

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About the Creator

Kodah

- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Poetry, Dark, Mental health, Psychological, Surreal, Nature, Mythical

~๐“ข๐“ฝ๐“ธ๐“ป๐“ฒ๐“ฎ๐“ผ ๐“ฌ๐“ช๐“ท ๐“ซ๐“ฎ ๐“ช ๐“ต๐“ฒ๐“ฝ๐“ฝ๐“ต๐“ฎ ๐“ญ๐“ฎ๐“ฎ๐“น~

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  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 months ago

    It's so difficult when this happens. I'd always prefer to have my friend in the spotlight with me, not outshine them. Because then it becomes an unbalanced friendship. So sorry this happened to you. Sending you lots of love and hugs โค๏ธ

  • Priya P.3 months ago

    I know how it feels to be in the shadows of someone. Great poem! ๐Ÿ˜Š

  • Carrie 3 months ago

    โ€œIn the World of Darknessโ€. Loved this poem!

  • Aaliyah Madison3 months ago

    Excellent.

  • Paul Stewart3 months ago

    This is stunning. Loved the repetition that gave emphasism to your feelings. An emotional piece for sure. Some people want to lift us, others want to lift themselves...well done, Kodah!

  • Hannah Moore3 months ago

    I like the way the friend both casts light and then blocks it out too.

  • Jade Loson3 months ago

    Beautiful poem Kodah! ๐Ÿซถ

  • Test3 months ago

    Another great poem

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