In My Head.
I think I made you up inside my head.
I shut my eyes, and all the world drops dead,
The fate that serves the thread of life.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)
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I dreamed that you bewitched me into bed,
And sung me moon-struck, kissed me bane,
Yet, you still make me feel insane~
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Mind of imagination, is where you existed,
Forever deep, your still sick and twisted.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)
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The way I felt when I first met you,
Felt a lot like falling in love,
Even if in many ways, you were still in my head~
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Smooth as a whisper, it could weather any storm.
But time's cruel embrace, it fades away,
Leaving behind echoes of a love in disarray.
(I think I made you up inside my head~)
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Twisted words, Twisted minds,
God, you make me remind,
I shut my eyes, and all the world drops dead.
(I think I made you up inside my head~)
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~
Authors Notes:
Thank you so much for reading! ๐
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Reference of title and quotes by - Sylvia Plath's poem.
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Kodah
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Comments (22)
Great poem, Kodah
I loved this, itโs so moving & the repetition at the ends feels like a chant, which made my reading experience even better!
So much goes on inside our heads. The poem is well done. Congrats on top story.
I love this Kodah! And congrats on Top Story!
Great job!
Congrats on top story!!๐โค๏ธ
There is a lot more to this than the words, you somehow managed to evoke emotions of hidden inner feelings. ( just my thoughts) Congratulations
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ๐๐๐๐๐๐
Congrats on top story.
This was powerful Congrats on earning Top Story! I might be projecting my own stuff onto this piece, but I got the sense that the speaker was talking about a person in whose personality they were deceived and believe that invented it themselves
Awesome!!! Love it!!!๐โค๏ธโค๏ธ Congratulations on Top Story too!!!
Well done! Keep pushing forward with your excellent workโcongrats!
I shut my eyes, and all the world drops dead. What was a great opening line. Good job.
Lovely poem Kodahโค๏ธ
This felt so poignant and intense but I'm not sure to which piece of yours this is connected to ๐
Love it! So sad yet so beautiful๐
Beautiful Kodah!
You're doing amazing work
Nice rhythm
NICE
GOOD
I think everyone makes up a perfect lover inside their head at least once in their life. Well done!