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It’s Hard To Tell.

a love poem

By Matthew FrommPublished 9 months ago 1 min read
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It’s Hard To Tell.
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It’s hard to tell.

Does she like me?

Or does she not?

Do I say hi?

Walk on by?

Is her mind full of me?

Like mine is of her?

Is that odd?

Is that mad?

Is love wild?

Is it sad?

Will we walk hand in hand?

Will we dig our toes in the sand?

I lay in bed

with sad song in my head.

A song of love and loss

fills my head

Is love best?

A cure?

A dire fate?

All day it fills my head:

Am I sane?

Or just in love?

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About the Creator

Matthew Fromm

Full-time nerd, history enthusiast, and proprietor of random knowledge. The best way to find your perfect story is to make it yourself.

Here there be dragons, and knights, and castles, and quests for entities not wished to be found.

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  • Cathy holmes7 months ago

    Beautiful poem. Questions a lot of us ask.

  • Mother Combs8 months ago

    beautifully written

  • Oh boy, I've been there before! Your poem resonated so deeply with me! I loved it!

  • Lamar Wiggins9 months ago

    Ahhh, the many questions we ask ourselves. I like where you went with this. Great entry.

  • Ian Read9 months ago

    Can't say I haven't been here before! Wonderful take on such a relatable thing.

  • Mohammed Darasi9 months ago

    I'm sure all of us has these exact thoughts in our heads at some point in our lives. Great poem 👏🏽

  • C. H. Richard9 months ago

    Expresses the anxiety of a crush so well. ❤️

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