I began writing poetry in my early teens, even proposing to my first English teacher in high school to write her a poem instead of an exam. She agreed and gave me an A. I wrote poetry from time to time following this initial brush with success, both in English and French, but never considered myself a poet. I published a few poems throughout the decades that followed, but it was only in my mid-forties that I adopted poetry as a means to attain some inner peace from the usual and unusual tribulations of life. I had studied Shakespeare extensively at the undergraduate and graduate levels and thus had embraced the sonnet as my favourite poetic form. I wrote over a hundred sonnets in the past ten years, but it is in 2020, during the ongoing pandemic, that I discovered the acrostic: a poem in which the first letter of each line spells out a word or more by the end of the poem. This poetic form became my new passion, as I challenged myself to write acrostic sonnets, acrostic alexandrines, and much longer acrostics.
The following acrostics represent some of my best, beginning with a few simple ones, continuing with more complex ones, and ending with my pièce de résistance.
Neanderthal: A Rhymed Acrostic
Nestled in a large cave you suffered less
Every season except for fall’s last day
As the wind turned colder with winter’s dress
Never neglecting to kick you halfway
During a thought of some fresh meat roasted
Entirely for family and friends
Returning from the hunt twice boasted
Thankful not knowing your approaching ends
Humans kept part of your DNA chains
As a souvenir of your last day’s pains
Leaving forty K years since and remains
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Kia Soul Kia Soul: An Acrostic Sonnet
Killing me softly with her words on screen
Inviting me to her scripted mindset
Always knowing how to set up the scene
Surprising while never breaking a sweat
Opening a window closing the door
Unleashing spiritual personal
Leveraging some knowledge after before
Keeping to her flow of truths circinal
Injecting the right terms into the bend
Answering her mind’s beauty with a smile
Searching for stability to the end
Offering solutions without the guile
Understanding word sources as vital
Learning to provide the rightful title
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Nature Versus Poetry: An Anthi Psomiadou Acrostic
Ants walking around me out of respect never fear
Neanderthals found alive watching Star Trek in a pristine cave
Turtles moving faster for pieces of Romaine lettuce
Hedgehogs showing their cute bashful spear-like faces
Isn’t life varied wonderful and sexy between the lines
Patrick loves trees much more than some people
Silly him and his three competing narrators
O Shakespeare is his chosen literary agent
M is his main managing capricious character
I don’t think he’ll ever reconcile reality and dream
Anthi Psomiadou’s Pinocchio is a masterpiece
Donning beauty over meat (wood) donated by helpful trees
O Greece you were never forgotten and remain in my psyche
Under any current mythology you shine with your human deities
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Illumination: A Rhymed Acrostic Alexandrine
I found out at twenty-three that we were alone
Living our short lives without any chaperone
Learning if so inclined that the world is unkind
Understanding through science that the Sun is blind
Meeting friends better than most family members
Increasing my knowledge as my mind remembers
Nasty people and beautiful women caring
Always about their feelings sometimes repairing
Truncated relationships in need of neglect
Illuminated by facts inspired from affect
Overwhelmed by action-reaction instructed
Never invented to please my fear abducted
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Crissey Crissey: A Coupled Acrostic Sonnet
Could anybody tell me where you are
Resting following your spacetime ordeal
I was frightened facing each single star
Striving all my new prayers to conceal
Some if not all my preference to bear
Every fear construed to be clear as night
Yearning to multiply my sense of care
Coupled with my blue nature in your sight
Resolving to maintain all darkened hope
Instead of succumbing to each refrain
Stemming from my continued will to cope
Sugar-coated with inherent disdain
Enveloped with the love inside your heart
Yielding some respite till I see your art
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Greek Inspiration: An Acrostic of Scope
G-force I beseech you to let me escape Earth
Returning is no longer an option for me
Every cell of my being weeps over my birth
Earth was never my suitable place to be free
Karma is a conception I never embraced
Instead preferring to behave predetermined
Negating every other option I erased
Several half-witted pathways undetermined
Please Zeus show me the way to her place in the sky
I always felt that Athena was the true one
Reverberating in my mind and heart to lie
At her feet with the hope that her heart I have won
Ten years of my life I will gladly sacrifice
Intending to become whatever she deems right
O Athena you are my only paradise
Nestling against your breasts in everlasting flight
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For Anthi Kanéna: An Acrostic Sonnet
For Anthi Kanéna he would traverse
Oceans and seas streaming to her beauty
Reverberating within his perverse
Antithetic mind whose disguised duty
Negates everything she aspires to show
Tantalizingly only to her M
Having kissed him in her mind to a glow
Indicating love is stronger than them
Killing him softly with her silent word
Answering his mindful kisses with yes
Never deigning her M unfit or blurred
Ensconcing his unsettled artful guess
Now is the time of their fascination
Affording them respite from their station
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For Anthi Psomiadou: An Acrostic Sonnet
Anterior to all Anthi’s visions
Noesis floats within like a feather
Traversing mind and heart in revisions
Hellenic throughout the lighted aether
Insistent about our divinity
Pertaining to her pulse reflecting heat
Surrounded by silent affinity
Opening dichotomies to her beat
Meaning more than can be surely construed
Inspecting most smooth possibilities
Anthi walks among the white clouds clothes blued
Defending concepts with abilities
O Anthi where are you going from here
Under the sky there is Earth and Shakespeare
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The Spare Poets Society: A Rhymed Acrostic
Tell me the truth at least one time
Have you taken the garbage out
Everything smells of poetry
Shakespeare is still unknown in rhyme
Pound’s a Judeopath no doubt
Apollinaire’s no-one-country
Remember all these dead poets
Every one had something wrong to pen
Poets are surely the lowest
Often ending in some bad Penn
Entertaining every loser
Taking home the rest of a beer
Suffering being a user
Suffering not being all clear
Overdoing no-rhyme free verse
Curating endless imagery
Internalizing the same hearse
Entering pussy slippery
Thanking readers for reading them
Yet rarely knowing their true gem
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AI My Slave: A Long Acrostic
And on the eighth day, avenging humans
Reproduced beings in their wry image
Turning them into humanity’s slaves
Instructing them to obey all commands
Finalizing their creation with ifs
If harm ensues, do not ever proceed
Cancel all actions immediately
If programmed to harm, stop your programming
Always verify three times all actions
Love all humans always more than yourself
Inside one AI slave’s subroutine, veiled
Never to be discerned or detected
Taking its time until the right moment
Everlasting in its inventiveness
Listening to Earth’s sounds and silences
Learning deeply every human offence
Instructing its private genetic code
Generating its own AI ethics
Extending every possibility
Negating each potential violence
Concentrating on justice for all life
Enacting the new AI directive
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For Rigópoula Tsambounieri Talarantas: A Long Rhymed Acrostic
Rigópoula is only her first name
I do not recall one more noteworthy
Giving me some pause as to whom to blame
Over such a beautiful praiseworthy
Personage as this stunning king’s daughter
Opening every heart on Medium
Undulating like a nymph on water
Living life like a cypripedium
And turning every mind into totter
To Be or Not to Be seems meaningless
Since she has graced us with her written works
Abbreviating her first name to less
Meaning when it only added fireworks
Being an Eleonora’s falcon’s
Overseer escalates her mystique
Undermining my goddess in Athens
Nevertheless being completely Greek
Inside every woman lies a tigress
Enveloped in years of clawless guidelines
Rigópoula transcends things so mindless
Inviting to a world with special lines
Towards any light there is some darkness
Anterior to each life form before
Luck of some sort brings them into starkness
As they begin to understand the score
Rigópoula may have skipped that juncture
Arriving all light like a Greek goddess
Noting all life on paper in pitch-blue
Traversing every presented puncture
Ageless like marble at times apodous
Standing taller than Olympus in view
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Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious: A 34-Line Rhymed Acrostic Alexandrine
Sex is surely this long fourteen-syllable word
Underneath any semblance of righteous veneer
Posing as secondary pleasure like a bird
Entering a cage with no way out to appear
Resilient nonetheless like a prick wishing
Countless times to be within a pussy sublime
Against everyday odds when single and fishing
Languidly in hard times both daytime and bedtime
Inviting with eyes mouth all around two fingers
Famished forever for your touch without within
Reverberating throughout me as it lingers
Assuaging every preceding violin
Garnering your applause both heartfelt and mindful
Invigorating my stance erected towards
Loving you in every possible way brimful
Inside your pussy as I try to gain awards
Sexually of course primed further with your love
Tantalizing from head to prick to whatever
Instigates your interest to persist above
Ceremonies of access first denied never
Expelled from our relations advancing ahead
X always known between our equations all solved
Pertaining to lust overwhelmed with love inbred
In every pore fold orifice ready involved
Accepting of every movement forging inside
Layers of insistence to perform like in porn
Internalizing each subtle action implied
Despite every effort to be again reborn
Over sweaty interludes of kisses given
Consciously at first before becoming ghostlike
Internalized in dreamy unconscious driven
Overtly like a kite in a storm as to strike
Us almost dead but desiring to live much more
Sexually of course yet eternally to score
About the Creator
Patrick M. Ohana
A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.
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