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In The SpudBros Queue

A Terza Rima Poem About How I Had My First SpudBros Spud

By Mike Singleton ๐Ÿ’œ Mikeydred Published about a year ago โ€ข Updated about a year ago โ€ข 1 min read
Me waiting for a SpudBros Spud, ironically the album in the bag is Bob Dylan's "Desire"

Introduction

I don't do queuing out of choice; in fact, I actively avoid it. Sometimes you are forced to, but if I can get out of it, I will.

Three places I am ok with queuing are:

  • Fenham Fish Bar
  • The Magpie Cafe in Whitby

and now

  • The SpudBros Tram in Preston Flag Market.

This uses a poetry form that Calvin London showed me: Here is the description:

A terza rima poem is an Italian form of poetry that consists of tercets that follow a chain rhyme in which the second line of each stanza rhymes with the first and last line of the subsequent stanza. It ends with a couplet rhyming with the middle line of the penultimate stanza. The pattern is ABA BCB CDC DED EE.

Each line must contain eleven syllables.

The music is "The Waiting" by Tom Petty

In The SpudBros Queue

๐Ÿฅ”๐Ÿง€๐Ÿ ๐Ÿšƒ๐Ÿ›๐Ÿ 

So Here I'm Standing On Preston Flag Market

Wondering What Spud I'm Going To Order

I'm Backed Up Against The Harris Wall, To Wait

๐Ÿฅ”

I've Been Told You Can Wait Two Hours, Oh Bother

But I Am Here Now And The Queue Is Moving

Red SpudBros Tram In My Sight, I'm A Mover

๐Ÿฅ”

People Are Being Served, Spuds They're Enjoying

Can Read The Menu, Fancy Garlic Chicken

Halfway Down The Queue, And My Spud In Coming

๐Ÿฅ”

I'm At The Tram, This Big Red Mobile Kitchen

They Give Me My Spud, Ask If I Want Tram Sauce

I Say No, And Eat This Tasty Nutrition

๐Ÿฅ”

So Did I Like It? Oh Yes, It Was Gorgeous

I 'll Queue Again To Enjoy A Spud, Of Course

๐Ÿฅ”๐Ÿง€๐Ÿ ๐Ÿšƒ๐Ÿ›๐Ÿ 

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    Written by Mike Singleton ๐Ÿ’œ Mikeydred