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In the garden with Erik

A prose poem

By Rachel DeemingPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
Erik Satie - Gnossienne No. 1

The wind stirs the trees, the shrubs, the woody stems and it bids me keep quiet with its soft presence, its susurrations in silky shimmers of movement;

Steam from tea reaches upwards, whirling its way to mock summer heaven where blue skies and a bright star emerge from sporadic white covers;

Piano. Simple piano. Chords struck, the companions to single notes. Each crotchet strikes at my heart. The hammer releases a sensation of...

Calm. Melodic but mournful. It buries itself deep within me and, like discovered opal, my thoughtful essence surfaces and travels with the music, riding a griffin or Pegasus or some other beast of magic;

I have not moved but I am moved: by the wind and its playful fingers in my hair; by the notes composed by a Frenchman that lift me aloft; by the glory of the green surrounding me; by the high tweets of bright tiny feathered bullets punctuating the music of men.

To explain this? I can't.

I'm trying but I can't.

It is beyond. The beauty of this world is beyond me.

And yet, am I not part of it?

Auditory, visual, natural stimulation, hitting me - are you in there?

And I think, Yes, I am and I thank you for knocking.

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    Written by Rachel Deeming