In Eclipse
Entering Into My First And Beautiful Challenge
By M.B Hesperia Published 2 months ago • 1 min read
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Photo by Justin Dickey on Unsplash
Eclipses come, a sight to see,
Covering sun or moon, so free.
Light fades, shadows dance in glee,
Illuminating the sky's mystery.
Passing moments of celestial spree,
Shaping wonders for all to agree.
Enjoy the show, with wonder decree.
About the Creator
M.B Hesperia
_I loose words when I tell , so I write. _
Being a single mother I use my earnings for my daughter's education and well-being. Highly appreciate your support and love.
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
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Comments (5)
This was absolutely wonderful! Very beautifully written!
You wrote in an excellent way...expressive
Beautiful! 💕🙏
This should be top story.
Its a first challenge for me on Vocal. Express your feelings how you feel for eclipse?? Is it a mystery , a horror , or an adventure for you?