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I Wrote Your Name in the Stars

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By Cathy holmesPublished about a month ago Updated about a month ago 1 min read
Top Story - June 2024
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I wrote your name in the stars last night.

I smiled, and waved hello.

I cried until my heart felt right.

I dried your tears with love.

*

I heard your voice in the robins’ song.

My message, heaven sent.

With mournful thoughts, I sang along.

Sing of joy, not of lament.

*

I felt your touch on the floral breeze.

The lilac scent, your fave.

I trimmed some petals from the trees.

You placed them on my grave.

*

I saw an angel in the clouds.

She’s there for your release.

I saw her smiling through her shroud.

We don’t want you to grieve.

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I wish that I could hold you close.

You’ll feel me in sunbeams.

When I rest my head, I miss you most.

I’ll be there in your dreams.

*

I wrote your name in the stars last night.

I hung the crescent moon.

I pray we’ll meet again one day.

I pray it won’t be soon.

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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Comments (53)

  • Dr. Jason Benskin28 days ago

    Congratulations on having your story featured as a top story on Vocal! This is a remarkable achievement, and it's clear why your work has received such recognition. Your storytelling is truly exceptional. The narrative was not only compelling but also beautifully crafted, holding my attention from start to finish. The way you developed the characters and plot was masterful, making the story both engaging and thought-provoking. Your unique voice and perspective shine through, setting your work apart. It’s evident that you poured a lot of passion and effort into this piece, and it has certainly paid off. I look forward to reading more of your incredible stories in the future. Keep up the fantastic work! Best regards, Dr. Jay

  • Tiffany Gordon 28 days ago

    This is breathtaking! Phenomenal work Cathy!!

  • Carol Townendabout a month ago

    How beautifully written is this? It's amazing Cathy.

  • Jakob Hejrskovabout a month ago

    Its really heart touching: https://reminimod.com/

  • angela hepworthabout a month ago

    Beautiful work Cathy.

  • Moharif Yuliantoabout a month ago

    Wow, it's amazing.

  • Leslie Writesabout a month ago

    This is so moving. It feels like a companion piece to your winning Haiku ❤️

  • J. R. Loweabout a month ago

    How do you always manage to make my eyes water, whether it’s from laughing or sobbing?? 😭

  • Poppy about a month ago

    Oh. My. Gosh. This is incredible Cathy. The perfect rhythm combined with the effortless back and forth and the gentle but heartbreaking tone is just breathtaking. Also the way it comes full circle is so perfect. Wow, I’m in awe.

  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    Okay...who the hell is cutting onions. In all seriousness...beautiful work...just beautiful. Honest, raw...beautiful and should be a winner. Well done Buddy and congrats on Top Story too. Yeah, you made me cry...but it was worth reading this and crying...or something. Loved it!

  • TahimaAniabout a month ago

    loved it..congratulations ♥️

  • Adamabout a month ago

    wow

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a month ago

    Hey, Cathy! You and Dharrshee are always top story tellers😍😍! I liked that way! If you publish tomorrow, then again it is a top story 😁😁. Wow, wow. May be I too in the long run 🤣🤣🤣🤣.

  • peterabout a month ago

    very good. ilike you

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a month ago

    Well-wrought! This was masterfully done. Wistfully sad but hopeful. A loved one would not want us to long too soon for the other side, knowing that we'll meet soon enough, and perhaps again and again. I shared this one to my facebook page. I hope it gets a few more readers your way!

  • Gerard DiLeoabout a month ago

    Great write!

  • Ammu about a month ago

    Beautiful...

  • JBazabout a month ago

    Back to say congratulations and I believe this will also be on the leaderboard

  • Really beautiful. Congratulations 🎉👏

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Ah, looks like your poem wrote it's name on the Top Story list! Congratulations! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Anna about a month ago

    Wow, you did an excellent job with this poem! So heartfelt and gentle, I love it!❤️

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a month ago

    What a beautiful and poignantly detailed piece of art, great work and congratulations on top story

  • JBazabout a month ago

    Cathy, I keep saying you out do yourself, this time you absolutely did. My heart is still recovering. If the judges read every entry like they say, this has to be a winner.

  • Luksi Bayouabout a month ago

    This is beautiful and heartfelt. 💜 Thank you for sharing.

  • Donna Fox (HKB)about a month ago

    This was really beautiful Cathy!! I love what you did here!! Great work and congrats on Top Story!

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