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Between Body And Sky

By sleepy draftsPublished 15 days ago β€’ 1 min read
Photo by SΓ©lina Farzaei on Unsplash

Don't beat yourself up, kid.

It's that wanderer's gift: to

Straddle the space between

Then and

Right now;

As if

Closing the distance

Too quickly, might

Implode the

Organization of all those plucky


surreal poetry

About the Creator

sleepy drafts

a sleepy writer named em :)

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Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  2. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    Writing reflected the title & theme

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  • Stephen Kramer Avitabilea day ago

    Wow what vivid imagery and vocabulary! Loved the feel of this!

  • A super poem!! Congrats on Top Story!

  • Dylan 12 days ago

    Great poem!

  • Silent Scarlett12 days ago

    Beautifully written

  • Zarbaz Khan13 days ago

    great work

  • Rizwan13 days ago

    amzing words

  • Carol Townend13 days ago

    And those 'plucky neurons' better not rip me apart! Brilliant Em.

  • CrownMasquerade14 days ago

    Nicely done. πŸ‘

  • This is so amazing!

  • QuillQuest14 days ago


  • Amazing

  • Your choice of words were brilliant! I loved this poem so much! Congratulations on your Top Story, Em!

  • Great...

  • Lovely :)

  • Cathy holmes15 days ago

    This is fabulous. Congrats on the TS

  • Gerald Holmes15 days ago

    This is very clever. Well done and congrats on the Top Story.

  • Dana Crandell15 days ago

    Loved this one! Congratulations on Top Story!

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  • Babs Iverson15 days ago

    Outstanding!!! Love this!!!πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’• Congratulations on T S too!!!

  • Kelsey Clarey15 days ago

    Well done!

  • RM Stockton15 days ago

    Wow! This is so good! Well done.

  • Gina C.15 days ago

    Wow 😍 This is so clever and wonderfully done! Highly intriguing, I agree with some below - this could be an intro for a story! So well-done, Em! Congrats on Top Story! ❀️❀️

  • Randa Ray15 days ago

    thanks for this <3

  • Lamar Wiggins15 days ago

    Your words here were beyond clever -Next level- No wonder it became a top story just moments after being published. Congrats! πŸ’–

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