Photo by Sélina Farzaei on Unsplash
Don't beat yourself up, kid.
It's that wanderer's gift: to
Straddle the space between
Then and
Right now;
As if
Closing the distance
Too quickly, might
Implode the
Organization of all those plucky
Neurons.
72
Share
About the Creator
sleepy drafts
a sleepy writer named em :)
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Keep reading
More stories from sleepy drafts and writers in Poets and other communities.
Comments (39)
Wow what vivid imagery and vocabulary! Loved the feel of this!
A super poem!! Congrats on Top Story!
Great poem!
Beautifully written
great work
amzing words
And those 'plucky neurons' better not rip me apart! Brilliant Em.
Nicely done. 👍
This is so amazing!
https://vocal.media/journal/unlocking-your-full-potential-the-10-hip-strategies-for-personal-growth
Amazing
https://vocal.media/humans/the-renaissance-a-resurgence-of-human-achievement
Your choice of words were brilliant! I loved this poem so much! Congratulations on your Top Story, Em!
Great...
Lovely :)
This is fabulous. Congrats on the TS
This is very clever. Well done and congrats on the Top Story.
Loved this one! Congratulations on Top Story!
Congratulations on your Top Story💯🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊
Outstanding!!! Love this!!!💖💖💕 Congratulations on T S too!!!
Well done!
Wow! This is so good! Well done.
Wow 😍 This is so clever and wonderfully done! Highly intriguing, I agree with some below - this could be an intro for a story! So well-done, Em! Congrats on Top Story! ❤️❤️
thanks for this <3
Your words here were beyond clever -Next level- No wonder it became a top story just moments after being published. Congrats! 💖