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Home hunting

Holding hands

By J. R. LowePublished about a year ago 1 min read
Home hunting
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House hunters.

Held hands.

Humble hearts.

His + hers.

Homely happiness.

Hospitalised.

His heart hastened.

Hers halted.

Heartbroken.

He held her hand,

Howling helplessly.

Heaven harboured her.

Halved.

He hallowed her history.

Hearing her harrow.

Hardened his heart.

Hampering his harmony.

Haunting his hopes.

He haemorrhaged happiness.

Hating his house.

Hardly his home.

Henceforth.

He’s hypoxic.

He huffs.

Heaving heavily.

His head.

His heart.

Heavy.

Holding hope.

He’s home-bound.

He hears her hush.

Harmonically.

Her heavenly halo

Heals his hurt.

Hereafter...

He holds her hand.

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About the Creator

J. R. Lowe

By day, I'm a PhD student, by night.... I'm still a PhD student, but sometimes I procrastinate by writing on Vocal. Based in Australia.

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Comments (7)

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh my goodness. Beautifully done and heartbreaking.

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Emotional and beautiful!!! Fabulous Tautogram poem!!!💖💖💕

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    This was excellent! It felt complete. Loved it.

  • Nice one❤️💯😉

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Bittersweet yet beautiful. Nicely done!

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    😭😭😭. That was great but so sad! Felt like a whole movie!

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