Here Comes The Sun, Are You Ready?
Here Comes The Sun Challenge By L.C. Schafer

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The mist hung in hopeful expectation
as the dew kissed each blade with romance
Nature plays her games with slight indignation
never willing to give true love a chance
Torn by the beauty around her
though she could not forget what he'd done
Never again trusting an amatuer lover
with a new twist on "here comes the sun"
This morning, as he leans out his window
to feel the kiss of the sun on his face
She approached it with vague innuendo
and put betelgeuse there, in its place
So instead of the sweet smell of petrichor
if it's love you are willing to wager
As your face melts away you'll hear her snicker
cause it's not nice to fool with mother nature
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A/N
Replacing our Sun with Betelgeuse would instantaneously vaporize Earth. As a red supergiant that is up to \(1,400\) times larger than our Sun, placing it at the center of the solar system would cause the star to stretch well past the orbits of Mars and Jupiter.
Also, the photo was taken this morning by my good friend Michelle Dickey. She and I work together in an office, but her true gift is photography. I will be using it again in a different kind of poem. Thank you Michelle for sharing your amazing talent with me!
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